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PostSubject: Butterfly - Daragon story   Butterfly - Daragon story I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 02, 2009 11:18 pm

Okay, I hope you like this one, it's a Daragon one Very Happy AND since I now know who's Dara's little brother is, he also has a part in this fic... well enjoy! Very Happy AND COMMENT!!


Chapter 1



Chae Rin, Sandara and Ji Yong walked together to school. They met up with Seung Hyun and Young Bae.
“ So, party this Saturday!?” Cae Rin smiled widely. Sandara shot a glare at her. “ What?!”
“ not in my house!”
“ Why not?!?”
“ What? Are you alone this Saturday?” Seung Hyun asked. Sandara blushed, and faced the ground.
“ yeah, and she doesn’t want to have a party because she thinks her little brother will tell on her”
“ Otherwise we can have it at my place” Ji Yong smiled. Sandara looked at him.
“ OK, so at Ji Yong’s place at Saturday… 8?” Young Bae asked.
“ works for me!” Chae Rin smiled.




“ Isn’t GD like the hottest!” Bom giggled. Sandara shot a shocking eye at her lab partner.
“ Bom!” She hissed.
“ What?!”
“ I don’t want to hear those things! You know he’s like a brother to me!”
“ yeah, but still” Bom winked. Sandara couldn’t help but to smile.
“ There’s a party at his house this saturday” Sandara added.
“ Girls!” they heard their teacher say behind their backs. They hurried to get back to reading the book. Futher back in the classroom, Ji Yong and Young Bae sat.
“ So?” Young Bae asked.
“ What?”
“ You and Dara?”
“ No.. I’m… I don’t want to ruin what we have, you know”
“ friendship…”
“ we’ve known each other longer that we’ve known anyone else” Young Bae nodded. Ji Yong was right, He Sandara and Ji Yong had been friends for a really long time, and if Sandara wouldn’t think the same of Ji Yong, there would be a big change in the group.




At lunch Sandara and Ji Yong went to sit alone. Bom looked at JI Yong and Minji and Chae Rin started to make fun of her.
“ What are you starring at!?” Chae Rin asked.
“ Nothing!”
“ well there’s someONE!” Minji replied. Bo, blushed…
“ It’s nothing”
“ Hey Dae Sung!” Chae Rin called out. Minji quickly hid her face when she saw who Chae Rin was calling over.
“ yeah?” He asked.
“ come, sit with us” she smiled and blinked at Bom. Minji blushed. Dae Sung smiled and took a seat next to Minji.
Seung Ri, Young Bae and Seung Hyun came and sat down with Bom and the others.
“ What’s happening?” Seung Ri asked. Trying to be cool.
“ that doesn’t work” Bom replied. Seung Ri lowered his head.
“ it does too!” He mumbled. Young Bae looked at Chae Rin who looked at him at the same time. She smiled.
“ So! Young Bae, could you help me with my English today after school?”
“ uh. Sure I can” He smiled and got a puff in the side by Seung Hyun.
Meanwhile Ji Yong and Sandara sat and talked.
“ Well thank you”
“ for?” Ji Yong asked with a stupid smile on his face.
“ for saving me with the party, you remember last time when Chae Rin told the whole school that I had a non parent weekend? God… I still haven’t forgiven her!” Sandara smiled. Ji Yong couldn’t help but to smile. The yard was full of students. And the sun was standing high in the sky. “ I might not come”
“ what?! Why?” Ji Yong looked at her, hurt of the news.
“ Parties aren’t my thing, and… I have a test to study for and… Sang Huyn”
“ now wait a minute! Since when wasn’t a party your thing?”
“ since…now?” Sandara tried innocently. Ji Yong sighed.
“ Why’s the reason”
“ TOP”
“ TOP?” Ji Yong’s face turned into a questioning mark. “ Are you fighting?”
“no…I….uh… well… you know” Ji Yong felted his heart beat slowing down so it almost felted as it wasn’t beating. “ Are you okay? You look a bit pale” Sandara pointed out.
“ No.. I’m fine” He smiled “ In fact! You’re going on this party, and I’m going to set you up with TOP!”
“ WHAT?!”
“ yeah” He forced a smile on his face.
“ I don’t..”
“ just show up and I handle the rest, okay?”
“…okay” Sandara looked skeptical at her friend. Last time he was trying to help her blow bubbles with gum, it ended with them both stuck in it with their hairs, and… a new haircut for both of them…

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PostSubject: Re: Butterfly - Daragon story   Butterfly - Daragon story I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 06, 2009 9:39 pm

please comment D: anyways here's chapter 2 Very Happy and I have to say... I'm falling for Sang Hyun here XD


chapter 2



Chae Rin and Young Bae sat in Young Bae’s kitchen. Chae Rin needed help with her English. “ CL…We went through this in class like 2 weeks ago” Young Bae said. His mother came into the kitchen and started with the dinner. She smiled at Chae Rin and her son.
“ But I wasn’t in class then” Chae Rin tried. Young Bae gave her a look.
“ You sat in the back with a book in front of…” Young Bae paused. “ You slept!” He shouted. Mrs. Dong turned around with a big smile on her face.
“ Are you staying for dinner Chae Rin?”
“uh…yeah” Chae Rin replied with a blush on her face.





Sang Hyun looked at his sister in disbelief. “ What?” Sandara asked “ What’s wrong with me making dinner for my lovely little brother?”
“ I’m not that lovely and you know it… you want something from me”
“ What makes you think that?!” Sandara asked. Sang Hyun chuckled when Sandara looked in the recipe for how to make kimchi pancakes.
“ Well first of all” He walked over to the counter. “ You never cook, second, if you cook, you want something out of me, and third… you always order home food when mum and dad are away” Sandara let her hands fall to her sides and she looked at her brother.
“ First of all, I do cook, second I don’t want something out of you I just want to make you some dinner, and third… I do cook when mum and dad are away! Just look at me now!” Sandara pointed at the pancake in the pan. Sang Hyun looked at it and then gave his sister a worryingly look. “ what?!” she asked.
“ It’s burning…” He said and left the room.
“ darn!”
“ Should I order home food?!” she heard him shout from the living room.
“ No!” She replied, but after awhile she sighed. “ Yes”
“ What do you want to eat?” Sang Hyun asked. “ And what do you want me to do?” Sandara walked out to the living room and dumped down next to her brother.
“ a pizza and I want you to follow me to GD’s party this Saturday”
“ okay, and why?” Sang Hyun looked at his sister.
“ I want you with me, and you never hang out with my friends.. And”
“ you never hang out with mine, I think that’s pretty good”
“ Sang Hyun please! I will be left alone in a corner there anyway”
“ yeah right, half the school is your friends!”
“ no they’re not!” They looked at each other. Trying to stare each other to death or something. Sandara gave up “ please!”
“ fine… But then you’re not leaving me!”
“ Promise!” She gave her brother a hug. “ I love you!”
“ yeah, yeah, I love you too and all that!” Sandara giggled at her brother’s uncomfortableness( that’s not a word O.o… but you get what I mean, right? XD)




The next day, Ji Yong and Seung Hyun stood by the school building, talking. Sandara knew that they where quite close, but she never seemed to talk to Seung Hyun alone like that. She sighed quietly. “ See you after school!” Sang Hyun said. Sandara woke up from her daydreaming and looked at her brother walking away from her, she waved at him and walked over to Ji Yong and Seung Hyun.
“ Hi!” She heard behind him. It was Minji and Bom.
“ hey!” She smiled and hugged the two.
“ Who was that?” Minji asked.
“ Who?”
“ the guy you came with?”
“ that’s her brother, pretty hot, huh?”
“ Bom!” Sandara said and hit her in the side.
“ What?!”
“ He’s younger than you!”
“ so?”
“ maybe something for me?” Minji smirked.
“ Minzy you..” Bom laughed. Sandara sighed at the two with a laugh following.
“ Minz.. Aren’t you two in the same class?”
“ No… I’m in yours… you know that I started a year before!” Sandara felted her cheeks burn.
“ Sorry” she laughed.
“ Hi girls!” Ji Yong, Seung Hyun and Seung Ri said, Ji Yong put his arm around Sandara’s neck. “ you coming this Saturday?” He asked.
“ of course!” Bom and Minji smiled. Seung Ri looked questioning at Ji Yong.
“ coming for what?” He asked. Bom and Minji looked at each other and walked away.
“ see you in class” they said to Sandara.
“ My party, you are coming!” Ji Yong said and started to chase Seung Ri around.
“ So, are you coming?” Seung Hyun asked. At this point Sandara noticed that she was alone with Seung Hyun.
“ uhh.. Yeah.. Of course!” She smiled. The school bell rang and Seung Hyun looked into her eyes and she thought she would faint at any second.
“ shall we go?” He asked.
“ uh-huh” she replied and followed him to class.

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PostSubject: Re: Butterfly - Daragon story   Butterfly - Daragon story I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 06, 2009 10:17 pm

it's awesome, I'm reading it on your blog so ~
but a bit comfusing, seens i only know the stage names of the people XD exept one of them, or maybe two
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awwws, thank you! Very Happy

if you want I can post the real names and the stage names there if you want? Very Happy
And please comment/rate there if you're not reading here :3

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Yes that would be awesome ^____^

I can only rate for some reason. =3 and I do rate! ^WW^
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owh, I'll look into that! Very Happy let me know when you can comment there ;D

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Ï can comment there now >=3
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PostSubject: Re: Butterfly - Daragon story   Butterfly - Daragon story I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 07, 2009 1:22 pm

coolness and I don't know what I did to fix that XD

anyways! I will still post this story here even most of the readers read it on the blog XD

oh btw...fun day school for 10 minutes! so worth it all -.- >_> now I have to write this damn christmas story that has to be funny for tomorrow.... I DON'T DO FUNNEH!!!! ;____; I do.... weird things XD
I'm thinking of writing a christmasday with The GazettE, though no one in class except one will understand the names and stuff >_> XD

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PostSubject: Re: Butterfly - Daragon story   Butterfly - Daragon story I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 07, 2009 7:03 pm

Chapter 3



“Seung Ri and Minji” The teached started. “Ji Yong and Young Bae” he looken at the two. “Bom and Chae Rin” He continued, walking through the classroom calling names of Others in the class. “Dae Sung, Sandara and Seung Hyun…looks like it’s you three for this chemical lab test” Sandara sighed as she sat next to Dae Sung who just couldn’t stop smiling.
“What are we suppose to do?” Seung Hyun asked as he leaned forward over his own table. Sandara and Dae Sung exchanged looks.
“ you where asleep, right?” Dae Sung asked. Seung Hyun starred at Sandara.
“He just went through what we’re going to do”
“oh..” Seung Hyun smiled and got up from his chair and walked over to Dae Sung and Sandara’s table.

Ji Yong and Young Bae turned back to their seats “So she likes TOP?” Young Bae asked. Ji Yong nodded.
“Yeah.. And I’m kind of helping her”
“what?!” Young Bae blinked a few times, taking in the new information.
“ you know that you’re killing your own chances by doing that!?” He hissed.
“I know.. But… you know”
“you’re hopeless!”

“ We stayed up all night!” Chae Rin giggled.
“ you did!?” Bom grinned.” You two fit perfectly!” She smiled. Chae Rin blushed. “ So, what do you think about me and GD?” Chae Rin bit her bottom lip. Bom looked at her. “ What?”
“ Me and Young Bae talked about them…”
“them?” Bom looked confused.
“ Sandara and Ji Yong”
“ But Dara likes TOP?” Bom looked more and more confused. Chae Rin looked over to Young Bae and Ji Yong, then to Seung Hyun and Sandara.
“ complicated…” Chae Rin said. The two girls sighed.
“ why can’t a guy just like a girl and she likes him back! Then there’s more for us others!” Bom said. And Chae Rin burst out into laughs.





“ Dara, can’t we stay at your place tonight and then make ourselves ready for the party the day after?” Chae Rin asked. Sandara looked at her friends.
“ what?” She asked.
“ please, it would be so fun! And there’s almost never just us girls!” Sandara looked at the other two girls sitting by the table.
“okay, fine!”
“ YAAAY!” Minji and Bom shouted out.
“ So… Chae Rin spended the night at Young Bae’s!” Bom revealed. Chae Rin hit her in the side. “ what it’s true!”
“ I don’t think anything will happen though” Chae Rin said. A silence fell upon the girls. “ So…Dara, how’s it going for you?” Dara looked at Chae Rin.
“ what do you mean?”
“ with TOP”
“oh…eh… I don’t know” Bom and Chae Rin looked at each other.




“ Slumber party!” Minji shouted out as she dumped down on the couch. The girls sat down in front of the TV as the front door opened and Sang Hyun walked inside.
“ hi!” Sandara said. He waved at his sister and went straight to his room.
“ can’t he join us?” Minji asked.
“ He doesn’t know you” Sandara replied. Chae Rin lit up and looked at Bom.
“ he knows Ji Yong”
“ yeah. But then this won’t be a girls night” Sandara replied and exchanged a worryingly look with Minji. Chae Rin and Bom looked at each other.
“ you’re right…” Suddenly the phone rang. Sandara answered. The girls saw her face turning into something that looked like a mix between shock and surprise.
“ TOP” She almost hissed out to give the girls a hint who was calling. “ what?!…uh…I think so…ouch!” Bom hit her in the side. Apparently she heard what TOP had asked. “ Sure!… okay, yeah, bye” She hung up and looked at Bom. “ I guess I have a date!” She blushed.

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Chapter 4


“ Hi”
“ HEY!” Ji Yong shouted at Sandara as they met each other. She laughed. He smiled back.
“ Where’s Seung Hyun?!” Sandara asked. She noticed that Ji Yong changed his face expression.
“ He’s at the bathroom!” He replied. She nodded and sat down on the couch, Ji Yong sat down next to her. Seung Ri went and turned the volume down. “ So… it’s been awhile” Ji Yong said. Sandara looked at him.
“ yeah… we should hang out more often!” She smiled. Ji Yong looked over at Young Bae, Chae Rin and Dae Sung who made hang gestures and other various moves towards him. He swallowed and turned back to Sandara. “ Dara…” He started. She looked at him.
“uh… well.. .there’s…something I need to tell you…” His hands were resting on his legs and he was very nervous.
“yes, you’re making me nervous with that… whatever you’re doing right now” Sandara replied. He smiled faintly.
“Dara!” She turned around and saw Seung Hyun coming towards her.
“hi!” she smiled and got up. She turned back to Ji Yong “ what was it you where going to say?” she asked.
“ it’s nothing big” He replied. Have fun. She smiled and she and Seung Hyun walked away and danced. Ji Yong walked over to Chae Rin and the others.
“ So?!” Seung Ri asked.
“ I didn’t say anything… TOP came and… She obviously…” Chae Rin walked over to him and slapped him over the cheek. Bom, Minji, Young Bae, Dae Sung, Seung Ri and Ji Yong starred shocked at Chae Rin.
“ Sorry, but… grow up! I mean you’re hot! Dara thinks you’re hot! Bom wants you!…though she wants every man…”
“ CL!?” Bom shouted.
“ What it’s the truth! And GD kind of has gotten all emo about it!” Ji Yong looked around him, no one else noticed anything.
“ What’s going on?”
“ Who are you?” Dae Sung asked. Seung Ri started acting like a police officer and starred at the new face.
“ That’s Sang Hyun! Dara’s hot little brother!” Bom smirked.
“ Hi Sang Hyun” Ji Yong replied.
“Hi… what are you guys arguing about?”
“ your sister!” Chae Rin said.
“oh…” He walked away.


“ So…” Seung Hyun smiled.
“yeah” Sandara replied with a smile. The two where holding a plastic cup in their hands and saw their other friends stand in a group and talk. “ I wonder what they’re talking about?” She saw her brother going over there and then just leave. She tilted her head at the group. “ I thought Bom had a thing for Sang Hyun”
“ sorry?”
“ oh” She realized she was talking out loud. Seung Hyun looked at her with a raising eyebrow. She blushed.
“ you’re really cute when you blush” she smiled, which made her blush even more. “ uh.. Dara…I’m really bad at this whole…dating stuff…but”
“oh, no need to apologize, I’m just as bad! Or…worse” she looked up to her left and waved with her hands. Seung Hyun smiled. “ go on” she giggled and put the plastic cup against her bottom lip.
“ Well… would you like to go for like… ice cream or something with me tomorrow?”
“ sure!” They both smiled. Sandara heard her brother shout her name. “ I have to go home, my babysitter” she sighed.
“ Aren’t you older then him?”
“yeah…but…I dragged him here, and he said he would go if he decided when we where going home”
“ah…”
“ yeah… but I’ll see you tomorrow at 12?”
“yeah sure” They hugged each other and when Sandara came to the front door She found her brother talking to a girl.
“ Are you ready?”
“yeah”
“ I’m just going to say bye to the others!” Sandara said.


Sandara went to say goodbye to her friends and hugged them. “ see you at school!” she smiled and the others replied with same. She gave Seung Hyun an extra look before she left, he smiled at her and she felted her cheeks burn as she walked over to her brother.
“ you’re like… like someone” he smiled
“ shut up!” she hit him in the side on their way out.


When the party was over, the gang sat in the sofa, talking. When Minji noticed something. “ Why are you guys holding hands?!” She asked Chae Rin and Young Bae, they both caught themselves and let go of each other.
“ are you two a couple?” Seung Hyun asked. Young Bae looked at Chae Rin, then back at Seung Hyun.
“ yeah”
“ I knew it!” Ji Yong said. The guys started to tease Young Bae and the girls started to ask 20 questions at Chae Rin, suddenly Ji Yong’s home telephone rang, he ran off to the kitchen to answer.
“ Bomie!” Minji said.
“yeah?”
“ Wanna follow me to the mall tomorrow?”
“sure”
“ hey…” Seung Ri said. Everyone looked at him. “ are everyone sleeping here tonight?”
“ duh!” Chae Rin replied.
“ Do you want GD all by yourself?” Seung Hyun asked. The girls giggled, and Seung Ri muttered something.
“ It took GD a long time by the phone” Dae Sung said. They looked towards the kitchen, then Bom broke the silence.
“ I want food!”
“ you always want food!” Chae Rin replied.


“ ok, thank you” Ji Yong said and hung up. His face turned into a depressed look as he dragged his body to the living room where his friends where.
“ But then I really have to work out later!” He heard Bom say.
“ hey! What took you so long!” Seung Hyun asked. Ji Yong looked up at the guys. He swallowed and saw how they looked at him, questioning.
“uhm…it’s…” he sighed. “ Sang Hyun and Dara”
“ What about them?” Seung Hyun asked worried.
“ they’re at the hospital”
“ WHAT!?” everyone shouted out.
“ how did you get to know that, isn’t their parents suppose to-”
“ my family takes care of them when their parents are gone, that’s why” Ji Yong replied Seung Hyun.
“ well why are we sitting here=! Let’s go see them!” Minji shouted and grabbed Dae Sung by the arm and dragged him towards the door…

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aha! Just as I thought!

I won't finnish this fic, cause it kinda sucks... or I will in the future, but then look at my new blog

http://mqchoi.wordpress.com/

I will be putting up ALL my fics there :3

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