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Here's my FanFic about Tora from Alice nine :3

Chapter 1

“ Excuse me… Do you know a Amano Shinji working here?” Mei asked, the big old man grinned at her.
“ What are you doing here?” He asked.
“ I’m looking for my brother…” Mei replied. She wondered why her brother even took this job in the first place, the guy was creeping her out. The big man went under the disk to search for some papers. He came up after a few minutes with a file.
“ Amano Shinji worked here 7 years ago… he quit to start a band”
“ok… thank you” She bowed and left the shop. As she walked out she looked to her right, and turned to her right and bumped into a guy not seeing him. “ Sorry!” She excused herself as they lied on the ground. As she looked at him from under her fringe.
“it’s okay” Mei got up and helped the guy up. “ What where you doing in this neighborhood, it’s not a place for a girl like you”
“ Then what are you doing here?” Mei replied. He smiled.
“ I’m Shou”
“ Mei” She replied and bowed. Awkward silence came upon them and Mei looked over to a café. “ Hey!” She said a little too loud making Shou jump.
“what?” He asked.
“ let’s go to the café, my treat, since I caused you dirty clothes” She said looking at his white pants with grey areas. He smiled.
“ You don’t have to”
“but I want to”
“okay”


“ So what are you doing here?” Shou asked sipping his coffee as they sat by the window. Mei looked at the people and cars coming and going.
“ I’m looking for my brother… my dad died so he has to take care of me now”
“ oh…”
“ Maybe you know him!?” Mei asked and looked at Shou with big eyes. “ Amano Shinji!” Shou dropped the sugar in the coffee as he starred at the girl.
“ Tora’s your big brother?”
“ Tora? No Shinji!”
“ Yeah… he goes under the name Tora, as me under Shou”
“ really?”
“ yeah”
“ oh…” Mei looked out the window again. Then back at Shou. “ Can you take me to him!?”
“Does he know that you’re coming to see him?”
“ No! if he would I wouldn’t be searching in a place like this, right?” She said. Shou smiled.
“ I suppose” He looked down at his cup. “ okay, I’ll drive you by his apartment and let you off there okay?”
“ sounds great!”


“ Here you go” Shou left her a paper with information, then he drove off. Mei looked at the building. It was way better then where she had found his latest address and work at. ( Where she found Shou) She walked inside and walked up the stairs then she came to the roof floor and knocked on the door. A thousand of butterflies went through her stomach as she heard sounds of someone inside. A man opened the door and she took a step back.
“ Who are you?” He asked.
“ I’m…Mei” She replied.
“ A fan?”
“Your sister…” Tora’s eyes widened.
“sister?!” He asked shocked. “ I don’t have a sister!”
“ Well no… you have a half sister” Mei tried to smile, but Tora didn’t seem to enjoy it. “ Our dad died and now you’re the one to take care of me”
“ you don’t have a mother?”
“ She died when I was 5” Tora sighed.
“ Well… I can’t take care of you”
“ But I have no one else!” Mei tried and stopped him from closing the door. He looked at her.
“ Do you have anywhere to stay?” She shook her head. “ come in” He sighed heavily and let her in. As she entered her eyes grew big of the sight. “ You’ll get to stay here until tomorrow, then I want you out… I’ll give you some money, so you can pay for a good hotel room” He said.
“okay…” Mei said looking around the apartment….


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great story ^^, what's going to happend if there's a (13+) in it? XO
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it's just like any other story, really I wouldn't have to use it, since there won't be swearings ( which is forbidden to use here) or any other scenes that may be inapropriate XD I just didn't know what to put there O_o... maybe a 10+? XD
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Yeah, it's a nice story...
I like the beginning and the fact that Mei is looking for her brother...

I'm curious at the next chapter ^^
I guess I just have to wait for chapter 2 xD
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Well you're darn right! XD

Chapter 2, maybe tomorrow, or sunday Razz
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awesome! I would like to read ^^D
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I made a little banner for this story, here it is :3


Family-ties [ 10+] ( Tora- Alice nine) 2rxeexh
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how cute!
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Thank you! cherry
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your welcome ^^D cute girl, and good picture of tora by the way ^w^
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Yeah, the banner is really nice... it's cute ^^
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Yeah! when I found it, there was this icon on the picture, and Iwas like NOOO! then I saw another one and I took it! >8D xD


Ayuni-chan - thanks =)
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then you did an extra good job ^^D
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Chapter 2

“ I can’t take care of you!” Tora said. Shou and Hiroto watched him walking from the sofa where Mei sat and then back to the sofa on the other side.
“ Well… you have to…” Mei gave him a paper. Tora opened and read out loud.
“is this a Will?” he asked. Mei nodded. “ When I die, my oldest son Amano Shinji will take care of Amano Mei” He looked at Mei. “ But really I can’t take care of you, I mean when I’m on tour-” Hiroto cut in.
“ couldn’t you take her with you?”
“Yes!?” Mei asked excited.
“ What about school?” Tora asked. Mei smiled.
“ you can get me a tutor, and a good one!….and he has to be cute!”
“ Mei…” Tora looked down and Mei looked questioning at him. “ get down from the table”
“oh” She jumped down and smiled at her big brother.
“ Can you go and do something, I need to talk with Shou and Hiroto” Tora then said. Mei looked at Hiroto and Shou.
“ Fine, I’ll go and call all my friends and be like a teenage girl should!” Mei walked away to find a phone. Hiroto starred at her as she disappeared. Shou hit him in the side.
“ What?”
“ Stop watching her!” Shou mumbled so Tora wouldn’t hear. He was in the kitchen making tea for the guys.
“ But she’s cute!” Hiroto tried. Shou hit him again but in the head.
“ She’s 15 years old you…creep!”
“ Well…what can-” Another hit in the head by Shou, when Tora came back. Hiroto looked at a questioning Tora.
“ what are you doing?” Tora asked. Hiroto suddenly turned to Shou and looked closely into his eyes. “ Have I ever told you how beautiful eyes you have?”
“ Stop that!” Shou got up from the sofa and looked at Hiroto.
“ Whatever works for you” Tora said and sat down.


“ I’m going out!”
“ Wait” Mei stopped and looked at Tora. “ You didn’t have a suitcase with you..”
“No I had a bag with my clothes” She replied. Tora looked suspiciously at her, but let her go. “ wait, wait, wait!” Mei turned around again. “ Where are you going?”
“ You don’t care!”
“ Mei!… Come here…” The girl went over to the couches and sat down. “ I’ve decided.. Since you don’t have anyone else… I’m going to take care of you”
“really?!” Mei asked
“ Yeah… So you can stay here”
“ thank you!” She threw herself over her brother. Then it came over her, this was the first time they ever hugged each other.
“ Now, where are you going?”
“ meeting Hiroto” She replied with a smile.
“… okay…”
“ Not a date!”
“ I didn’t say anything!”
“but you thought it!” Mei said crossing her arms. Tora lied down on the sofa.
“ have fun!” He said and closed his eyes. Mei smiled and left the apartment.
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HAHA XD this is really funny xD
I love Hiroto in this fic, so funny xD

Nice fic... Love it =D
I want to read more ^_^
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Awww The Chapters Are So Cute ^^, Hiroto Especially, Hehe Smile.
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i agree ^^D
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